Talk:CIO (PA)

= Welcome to SWG Wiki. = Great bio for your guild. Noticed some readability corrections you might want to effect on the bio.

You might want to consider revising the following line:


 * We like to keep this way.

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 * We would like to keep it this way.

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 * In addition, cheating, exploiting, illegal activity, malicious lying, and defrauding other players is strictly prohibited. This club and this organization do not condone anything other than unfair play.

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 * In addition, cheating, exploiting, illegal activity, malicious lying, and defrauding other players is strictly prohibited. This club and this organization does not condone anything other than fair play.

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 * In addition, cheating, exploiting, illegal activity, malicious lying, and defrauding other players is strictly prohibited. This club and this organization does not condone unfair play.

Also


 * Keep in mind that this is only game, and there is no reason to break rules and deplete one of the few real elements in play, honor, for mere virtual rewards.

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 * Keep in mind that this is only a game, and there is no reason to break rules and deplete one of the few real elements in play, honor, for mere virtual rewards.